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TorieCheng72 wrote:Excuse me, didn't realize y'all were the almighty soldiers weeding out opinions. Get a life gangsta wanna beez.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
FauxPas wrote:It's not very good for many reasons, but I'll concentrate on the basic ones:
It's simply boring. There's an obvious focal point, but it's so bland that the background becomes a more interesting distraction. The colors are moldy and faded, with the contrast sampled poorly throughout.
It lacks in overall flow, and the lighting is far from dynamic. You could easily improve this piece by adding some lighting, blurring a few brush strokes behind your 'main image' and pasting a few chalked backgrounds.
You'd be surprised how much pizazz a simple pixel effect can add if you erase lightly around certain areas.
If you need some tutorial-style direction, just let me know.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
FauxPas wrote:No problem, and don't be discouraged by my criticism. I just want to see people that enjoy GFX get better.
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