
Drama Setter wrote:sux
Drama Setter wrote:sux
TorieCheng72 wrote:Excuse me, didn't realize y'all were the almighty soldiers weeding out opinions. Get a life gangsta wanna beez.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
FauxPas wrote:The concept is good; the execution, not so much. I like the font, and the lighting illuminating the font, other than that it's poorly edited. The general atmospheric lighting doesn't compliment the picture, and the colors seem out of place for such a darkly themed expression. The tone is nice, which helps appreciate the overall feel of the piece, but there's little going on, and the subtlety is destroyed by the emptiness of the foggy background.
I like it, but that's because I'm looking at what it can be, not at what it is in its current state. You can easily correct many of the things I mentioned above by dimming the lights a bit, reshaping the background with some original brushes, or even adding an effect and fading it with creative brushing/blending. It doesn't require much work, and you're well on your way.
Omega wrote:Interesting observations Fauxpas, although I don't agree with any of them. As far as the colors go, that's exactly the color that I "see" when hearing the song. The strong, dark purple colors remind me of this line from the song, specially the funeral part:
Its playing a song, so beautiful and the room is dark
The moon is full, I smell a funeral, guess I’ll loom in the park
And I like the simplicity of it. I'm not the guy who throws a bunch of stuff together and see what sticks with it. Actually, this sig had other different layers of background, but they didn't do much for the overall concept, so I left it as it is, and I'm pretty damn happy with it.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
Omega wrote:I'm trying to "see" what you are seeing, but again, completely disagree with everything. But hey, you can't please 'em all, so if you think is not polished, or is not a good graphic in the first place, well, good for you man. I think the exact opposite.
Since it seems that you are a great graphic designer who knows what you are talking about (and I do hope you are one), I'd like to see how you can greatly improve what I did, specially after I specifically explained the context of what I was going for, and post your signature here.
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