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Sentus-Bow to the Beat

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Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 02:23

I put alot of time into this. Would love some good feed :worship:

My reign is the pure essence of power
A king in the game leavin the peasants devoured
Then your fame reaches from seconds to hours
And soon everything under the heavens is ours
In the presence of cowards strike with a lethal blow
So that when you grab the mic all the people know
That on the stage there's only one king in one land
And then you'll make sure none sing and none stand
I'm done playin, im ready to fuckin take over
Till you feel worse than new years day when you awake sober
The game's soldier, im movin you through the phase
To what you used to praise, when punches struck in abusive ways
When you were confused and dazed and left to bemuse for days
When I hop on the beat and rock you like medusa's gaze
You never knew a Mays who had this much passion for rap
The fame may be annoying but hell, im asking for that

(Chorus)
Fuck praying to the gods I only bow to the beat
Cause it's the music that makes the sound so discreet
When you get in the zone and you pounce then you eat
So beware if you ever fuck around with the beast

Im Sick with the flow, hop on the porch and kick in the do
Get cut in pieces like the beat when im rippin it slow
The fun increases on the street when I stick it to hoes
A bunch of beasts is what I meet when im grippin the bow
So I send an arrow right through the heart
You won't fuck wit the pharaohs might if you smart
I'll fight through the dark and reach the light beyond
And take out anyone dumb enough who might respond
From night to dawn I drop jaws like when a dike speaks
My verse traps you in the darkness like im Mike Leach
These pipe dreams only mean were all over the underground
In a lucid state, who can wait for when the thunder pounds
Fuck around and ill put the fuckin knife to chest
I'm white n blessed with rhymes that could ignite the flesh
I'll surpass everyone in history till only Christ is left
But fuck it, I'll fight the best, it's Sentus with life n death

(Chorus)

Sieze the beat and spit it out like a piece of meat
It's a feast to me cause on each track im releasin heat
I'm easily the best so don't start wit that crap
I got a green thumb cause my pen grows art with a pad
Mozart wit the rap I'm ready to confide to the beats
It rides through my speech like the tide through a beach
In my eyes you will see its raging through my glands
Cause music is a part of me and it has made me who I am

(Chorus)
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 03:01

that as dope as hell, it was packed full of multies but all flow so easily
stayed on a specific topic, and had some great lines in there

best ive seen from you :y:
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 04:51

Thanks Alot :worship:
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby classthe_king » Jan 6th, '10, 03:34

smh, pussies afraid.
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby gutawafang » Jan 6th, '10, 03:36

Fuck it. I'ma bow to the beat man. :worship:

The first motherfucking verse was motherfucking fire. It is a lot better than the second verse to me man. Constant multis throughout.
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby Solace » Jan 6th, '10, 03:47

You know what I think about this already and it's mad dope in my opinion. After a couple more reads I can definitely say this is one of your best pieces ever, as I before didn't have a good opinion on where it stands. Can't wait for the audio :y:
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby classthe_king » Jan 6th, '10, 12:33

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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby BILI » Jan 6th, '10, 13:13

This was awesome man,nice concept,it flowed good,and some dope multies,dope piece as others said
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby classthe_king » Jan 7th, '10, 00:25

Thanks BILI
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Re: Sentus-Bow to the Beat

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 15:51

Bump :unsure:
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