by Solace » Jan 9th, '10, 17:29
Fa-Q wrote:Pretty good guys...good structure and multis...but what all you guys can improve on is vocab and just plain spell your verses write...and don't use "u" for you...it makes it so much easier to read...plus it looks good...keep it up yall
by Yah-hah » Jan 9th, '10, 17:33
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
by bullet_boy46 » Jan 9th, '10, 17:35
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush
by Edge » Jan 9th, '10, 17:38
Solace wrote:Fa-Q wrote:Pretty good guys...good structure and multis...but what all you guys can improve on is vocab and just plain spell your verses write...and don't use "u" for you...it makes it so much easier to read...plus it looks good...keep it up yall
Couldn't have said it better than Fa-Q, you guys got ambition keep it up. GG did probably the worst here, then Bullet Boy and Edge did it best. Bullet ended that shit off well. Keep improving.
by bullet_boy46 » Jan 9th, '10, 17:46
Edge wrote:Solace wrote:Fa-Q wrote:Pretty good guys...good structure and multis...but what all you guys can improve on is vocab and just plain spell your verses write...and don't use "u" for you...it makes it so much easier to read...plus it looks good...keep it up yall
Couldn't have said it better than Fa-Q, you guys got ambition keep it up. GG did probably the worst here, then Bullet Boy and Edge did it best. Bullet ended that shit off well. Keep improving.
haha thanks man... we might turn us 3 into a group since we all live in the same area and are all new to writing.... dont shit on us like last time tho if we do haha
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush
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