"Out My Mind" 1st Verse

[2sDay]

2sDay has arrived, the party is here, is this clear?,
Don't fear the crazy, I'm to lazy to kill you my dear,
Why tears, I fear that you don't want me here,
I'll have to make you dissapear, time to kick into gear,
Rehab didn't work, So we have somethings to discuss,
You cuss but if keep on it will only get worse for us,
Cut your stomach up until I see all of that puss,
Well, you made me do it, your fault you piece of shit,
Throwing a desperation fit, but your confession made me hit,
Hitting, flirting on the fucking kid next door, oversexed whore,
You tore my heart, into four parts, that's why your dead on the floor,
My body's core is now a black hole, because of one slutty wack hoe,
I lack soul, but i'm coming back slow, one would think I'm Fat Joe,
My mind collects, in a blind ressurect, and when i spit my flow,
My baby stands, I touch her lady hands, and I finally say hello,

[Yah-hah]

Coming back slow, Fat Joe LMAO!!

[Enimee]

good advice coleon, sick verse though relapse reminiscant good shit keep at it

[2sDay]

thanx to every1
good advice coleon... apperciate it

[2sDay]

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[Emadyville]

yeah do what coleon said, he is def 100% right on that

verse was good, reminiscent of eminem tho, which is never really a good thing, but you're young and learning, I was the same way about 10 years ago homie, keep writin

[2sDay]

thanks 2 everyone.

[2sDay]

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