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Scars pt.2

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Scars pt.2

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 10th, '10, 17:56

You can't keep me down I'll just rise above it,
Brush the ash off my shoulder still alive because its,
In my blood in my soul its my destiny,
From my birth to my death I can't rest you see,
The tears in my eyes how its affecting me,
Affectionately you caress me telling me its okay,
This persecution lasts only 364 more days,
I can't relax I got too many splinters in my back,
Shins still broken from falling into these traps,
Put on that act and yet you call me a loser,
Casts on my kneecaps when you broke them so I would suffocate sooner,
Lunar eclipse couldn't see the sun before i was found,
Blood is so blinding this clock just keeps winding down,
Throughout the whole town you can hear them laughing at me,
Frown when you see that I can still smile without all of my teeth,
You knock them out and continue to knock me down,
Take my lashes the whip crashes without making a sound,
In my face there you eat while im starved for weeks,
I got blisters on my feet from walking around in these cleats,
The punches never end it just never seem so cease,
Teeth grinding now that im biting right through my mouthpiece,
Visions so fainted tainted looking through my facemask,
My face is smashed how long will this onslaught last,
Im beaten bashed till all my bones are broken,
Seein the flash from whiplash from words that I've spoken,
Chokin on this rope you put around my neck,
And I dont expect from hanging that ill get some rest,
Unless of course your like me so filled with remores,
Dagger in my heart now your attacking the sourse,


Man how did this metamorphosis happen,
Even the corpses are laughin they stand up and start clappin,
But I rise up and grin the crowds pulse weakens,
Won't stop fighting till its my pulse that ceases,
My flame burns eternal it can never be extinguished,
Relinquished flying out the ash like a phoenix,
Yet im so blind 16 years since they turned out the light,
My arms are ripped apart from pulling my straight jacket so tight,
Russian roulette with a bullet in every chamber,
They watch as this stranger pulls the trigger in anger,
Im so tired and to end it all just seems so simple,
9 millimeter round piercing my temple,
Beaten and torn the tears contian my deep green eyes,
Vision so distorted I couldn't see if I tried,
My last words are spoken through broken lips burning see,
They're so weak yet they echo throughout eternity
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Scars pt.2

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 10th, '10, 19:42

Fuck Jus...you had good structure back then? What happened lol just kidding naw I like this one a little less then part one but still dope
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Re: Scars pt.2

Postby Just Silver » Jan 10th, '10, 19:59

Emotional shit made me want to watch documentary for some reason


good shit guy

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