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Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 10th, '10, 20:29

Yall know I'm on home plate, I'm the lead batter,
Swingin with garden tools, like a weed wacker,
But see the worst thing, was I was never first string,
I would lipsync over N'Sync, and use to curse an' sing,
Fuck on camera, before I ever try and burst on the seen,
I used to have blonde hair, like butters off South Park,
People used to learn new cuss words, when my mouth barked,
My rhyming schemes, are like shining wings, and diamond rings,
I put those rings on middle fingers, talkin to deafs, signing thing,
Ima make Kate Hudson, take late husbands,
And there had better be wedding cake, at least eight dozen,
I said to her seems like you can handle a dick in the dark,
You stuck a finger in Joe Montanas ass at candle stick park,
So I ask her, Tera Patrick, tell me, where's the magic,
You got two big balloons, no wonder your hairs static,
Yall know, I'll never stand like Jay, in a B-Boy stance,
I'm too fuckin busy, tryin to teach uncle LeRoy to dance,
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Just Silver » Jan 10th, '10, 21:51

Liked the last half more than 1st

"And there had better be wedding cake, at least eight dozen,"
liked that line lol

overall very weird and what is candlestick park? lol

king of random as usual
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 10th, '10, 22:18

Its where the 49ers play...Joe Montana is the best 49ers quarterback of all time...lol idk if you know that and thanks
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Just Silver » Jan 10th, '10, 22:35

Fa-Q wrote:Its where the 49ers play...Joe Montana is the best 49ers quarterback of all time...lol idk if you know that and thanks

i didnt lol now u see why i was confused :sweating:
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 10th, '10, 22:45

Just Silver wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Its where the 49ers play...Joe Montana is the best 49ers quarterback of all time...lol idk if you know that and thanks

i didnt lol now u see why i was confused :sweating:

Lol no problem...its understandable...nobody gives a fuck about NFL outside of the US...lol
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jan 10th, '10, 23:04

Fa-Q wrote:
Just Silver wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Its where the 49ers play...Joe Montana is the best 49ers quarterback of all time...lol idk if you know that and thanks

i didnt lol now u see why i was confused :sweating:

Lol no problem...its understandable...nobody gives a fuck about NFL outside of the US...lol

NFL= :worship: :worship:

anyways nice drop... random shit as usual :D
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Arrinef » Jan 10th, '10, 23:05

nice man,
props where its due

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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 11th, '10, 00:02

Thanks BulletBoy and Arrine
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby FAME » Jan 11th, '10, 02:38

omg! You mentioned Butters! :wub:

This seemed very mainstream like, not that it's a bad thing. I liked how you used a bunch of pop culture names in your rap kinda like Em in a way I guess. But like always you seem to put your own style in it, and great mulits btw.
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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 11th, '10, 08:16

:laughing: oh my god the Tera Patrick line = :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Verse...Random Shit you know how I do

Postby Element. » Jan 11th, '10, 08:18

I liked it :y:
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