Game as in Her...

[Just Silver]

Intro-I will speak these deaths
I will reap the deaf
if the music ain't heard
i will paint with words

Plain old words, hangovers the tribute that you sang over,
Plane old words, put the hanger first,
so i can put away the same old verse,
pertain bold curse,-ive, if its stiff,
with no predic-tions the game owed her?
as in her, i mean the cash and purp,
the rules of the rap we have right her.
brighter, hands hot, the mic burns,
psyche "her" as the game,
i said you might learn,
stay indifferent for differences sake,
and if this princess will hate, shove a dick in her face,
im giving it straight, no fake flavored,
go taking favors, from business raisers,
that make paper, off of labels that murder,
take tables to turn them
try a way to re word them, see we serve "him" the shit,
that is prepacked
no flash, then they send it half back,
to make a cash track, adding effects
making mad of a mess, hating it but still grabbing the checks,
brain washed
so much creativity stays off,
dimity gray cloth, of a really gay song,
dubbed and screwed, so you don't make government news,
..covet the dues?
why? their due to you, that bitch stays laughing, well who are you
an insolent tool that takes roots from the youth, summit booths,
high as fuck as some were roofs, what she done to routes
kill the bitch choke kick stab and some will shoot



Something different i tried

[Fa-Q]

Damn boy, idk if you're still in that slump but this got you out of it if you are. Now usually I'm not one to stress structure but it is bad on this piece...but the flow is great...I love this piece...kinda like a stop and go flow is how I went with it...dope shit Silv...love it

[Just Silver]

Damn boy, idk if you're still in that slump but this got you out of it if you are. Now usually I'm not one to stress structure but it is bad on this piece...but the flow is great...I love this piece...kinda like a stop and go flow is how I went with it...dope shit Silv...love it

Yea i got out lol my structure has been shit since i switched computers don't know why though lol

[Yah-hah]

I dug it. I like the plain words/plane words ish at the beginning. Was really dope, think I got the flow, Gettin back in that flow eh?

[gutawafang]

Unique rhyme scheme but still flows. Nice rhyming.

[Le Tunisien]

some cool multies and i like the rhymes u used
but structure needs to be fixed though,i wonder if it flows well hmm
and remove that word " gay " in ur rhymes and it will be fine =P xD
nice drop man,keep doin ya thang