QuickSand (Goodbye)

[Spyder]

Hook
Every move I make just helps to lose the faith
I choose my fate drowning when I try to move, escape
A crucial mistake, just when I think its at an end
Things get worse until I finally sink over my head.

This is my place to shine, all the shit I name it mine
But my real lifes shit this is all just a waste of time.
Cause everyday that I, write a piece or battle rap
I cant forget that fact of all the people that laugh at
Me to see if I’ll blast back. you expect the best
So much on my chest I cant eject a breath.
Scared to death need to rest, but I cant sleep
I cant seem to get comfortable in these damn sheets,
wanna yell but cant speak, everybody callin me fat
but no matter the laps I keep just fallin right back.
Its bullshit, wish I could end it all with this medicine
Always less than him don’t care if I take a breath again
Just let my head spin, all this pain and sorrow
Hopes down the drain and it wont change tomorrow.
Veins so hallow, like Jesus sustained and bound on the cross
Dads got water on the brain and its drownin his thoughts.
3rd surgery still hasn’t helped the emergency
im worried see, but cant let my family know its erkin me.
I don’t deserve to be, put in a position like this
Goin to someone else after kissin my lips…
Girls don’t want me either, though I understand it
I seem to have a habit of taken them for granted
Or just take advantage, god damn it I cant quit
No matter the times ive tried it keeps expandin.
No more album, or battlin til I get my head cleared
Just know everything it is true that I said here.

Hook
Every move I make just helps to lose the faith
I choose my fate drowning when I try to move, escape
A crucial mistake, just when I think its at an end
Things get worse until I finally sink over my head.

[Enimee]

i really like this, seriously diggin your flow on this one, the eject a breath line was pretty creative btw


but overall reaal nice good message and good delivery PROPZ

[Spyder]

thanks

[classthe_king]

Loved the hook.

Loved the verse too. It flowed perfectly and the rhymes were great. One of your best pieces keep it up.

[gutawafang]

I feel it man. Totally dig.

[Spyder]

thanks all of you
i wrote it in 5 minutes literally, it was all right there for me shit iwas feeling
so the positive feedback means more than u know

[mcZu]

I would change ''laugh at'' to ''laughed at'', that way it'll fit the scheme better.

Nice piece though Spydie, one of your best. Keep this shit up man.

[Spyder]

thanks Zu