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Roc Climbing

Postby J Roc » Jan 11th, '10, 15:50

I Feeel So Dirty , All Of These Smokes Hurt Me
So i started using a microwave cuz i quit Cold Turkey [?]
Imagine Me ... In a circle waiting for someone to pass the weed
Thinking theres a Giraffe Between These Cat's & Me
Im on a Cliff Waiting, I Just Hope There's a Rope Strapped To Me
So i won't bite the dust-dawg when i 'Jump-off' Like Battle League's
Ya'll Like Bad Puppies , When i give This 'Dawg Pounds'
The 'Bridge'-of-my-life Think-That-it's-nice until it all Fall's Down
These Are Just Rhymin' Scriptures Cuz i Like Ya Sister
And She Try's To Think Word's Cuz She Likes My Pictures
Mad that imma pimp? word? Your a 'Piece-of-Shit' Even-if You Fight In 'Litters'

Litter box haha ... Super light tho just some lines i didn't bother making nice
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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Spyder » Jan 11th, '10, 15:53

wasnt feeling this Rocky, i know you said real light but i want that dope shit all the time hhah
you came back for a bit but u get in block a lot lol

keep writin
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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 11th, '10, 15:57

Those lines would be good if you just polished them up a lil'. I lol'd at the litter box
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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 11th, '10, 16:34

Light-work for you, but still dope nonetheless. You always make your drops interesting to read, you never know where the flow is gonna take ya'!

Keep at it brotha!
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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 11th, '10, 16:49

Like stever spag said man always cool vibe. Diggin the jumpoff shouty :y:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 11th, '10, 23:54

Not really on the same level of your previous work, but some lines still bring the heat. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby gutawafang » Jan 12th, '10, 02:37

lol at the title. multis inspiring. :y:

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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Solace » Jan 12th, '10, 03:30

Still pretty dope even though it was weak for your standards. :y:
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Re: Roc Climbing

Postby Enimee » Jan 14th, '10, 05:13

lol nicce, random bars i like it lost the theme a lil but the fact that you stayed consistent with your multis and such was nice

pretty good roc pretty good
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