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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 14th, '10, 10:08

I'm a heavy Drinker and and a rhyme Inker I Think Your taking me too Lightly
it's more than Slighty unlikely that another rapper could do it this Nicely

I Snipe Beats from my Perspective I Guess it's the little Stresses I've been Left With
being Directed at My Thoughts so if figured Why Not let um Drive Off and Die Lost

in a Wave of Pain all becuz I Played the Game and everything Stayed the Same my Place Remains
among emcees that Make it Rain On the Streets when they Wanna G in Response to These

Wanna Be's that don't know their Soul Belongs ta Me somebody better let Um Know
those Dumb Ho's are One Mo reason why I Unload my Frustration Fuck Waiting

I don't have an Amazing history Of Patience so why am I Up Waiting for a Sign
inside my Mind you will Find what I call Mine my family, my Rhymes, and the Time

I spend Behind the excuse that I'm Fine hiding how I Feel cuz to me it has no Appeal
like a bad Deal so it's Concealed in a place so Real that it'll never be Revealed
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Re: late night bullshit

Postby Edge » Jan 14th, '10, 10:34

good shit my man... like the rhyme scheme and multis and flow :y:

what part of ny u from?
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Re: late night bullshit

Postby gutawafang » Jan 14th, '10, 10:41

Your structure is as unique as Enimee's. LOL.

And the way you write is like Roc. Caps for the first letter of each word.

Rain Matrix, I think overall, this is pretty random. I like the flow and the vocabulary only.
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Re: late night bullshit

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 14th, '10, 12:12

ITS RAININ ON TR AGAIN!
daym son, glad to see you again :b:

That was a dope verse, liked the use of multies, sick rhymes and wordplay
Keep droppin homie :y:
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: late night bullshit

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 14th, '10, 13:38

The one that starts wave of pain is my favorite. Where the hell you been man? I dug it multis multis mutlis lol I like the style its different ya know. Good shit :y:
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