I'm Motherfuckin Yah-hah

[Yah-hah]

In one of those moods ya know

I aint Spyder, tunisein, classthe_king or mcZu,
I aint J Roc, Anon, Edge wait till this shit hits you,
I'm not Solace, Fish, Tash8 or Xray,
I'm none of those cats in the first place,
I'm Fa-Q, BILI, Luna and Col dancing atop grave on my birthday,
Braindead I'm the worst case, I only think in multis,
With half ass punches like not even gravity can hold me,
There are probably others but I'm too drunk and bothered to mention,
Like you need more punches well bitch I'm J roc from another dimension,
Well you need more wordplay even though that shit doesnt fit you,
You want more wordplay? Bitch I'm mcZu with a helluva lot more issues,
Oh he's a Native cat come on dude how played is that,
I'll take ya raps to the 1600's and play it back,
Oh how original is that? Like you know wat it's like outside of the internet,
Wats it's like to stay outside and let your fingers become victim to the winters breath,
You probably never been in a fight a single day in your existence,
I've got 2 violent charges, put a kid in a coma I'm fucking relentless,
I spent my freshman yeah addicted, to herion think I'ma liar don't ya,
Talk to the torturers of the national juvenile Detox center in Arizona,
I spent 4 years wearing red bandannas around my head, in real life,
I've been jumped becasue of my brothers, my head scarred from the steel pipe,
My dad beat me when I was just six years old but I wasn't ever a kid,
Then got a second one who fucked me up worse than the first one ever did,
I've seen my mom with black eyes been jumped by black guys,
Then you want to tell me all of my raps lie?
Ask Fa-Q he's seen me play so great with my footabll love,
That day after when my hands swelled and I couldnt fit them into my football gloves,
He's seen me play with 3 broken ribs, broken wrist and a concusion, at running back,
He's seen me paralyzed on the ground with no legs escaping hell so I'm running back,
So don't ever fucking question me this isnt just for TR,
Me and my girl ride aint none crazier than we are,
It's her birthday today so I'ma celebrate aside from this rap,
Who cares when ya asking who's rappin, who the hell is this cat,
Like who's this other guy we gotta snap? You breakin me how?
I'm motherfucking little-wolf-who-sits-under-the-shade-of-the-clouds

[Fa-Q]

Damn Jus this is dope...its like crazy dope...I sense alotta frustration...I liked this piece a lot and the shits tru too

[GhanjaGod24]

No Doubt Yah-hah

I like how you mentioned other people on the forum but never actually compared them you just used them in your raps good shit man, your stuff is fire

[macdaddy019967]

cool i love the wordplay hehe

[mcZu]

Congratulate your girl for me man, hope you two will (or had) have a nice day celebrating it.

That said, nice piece Yah, structure was everywhere and nowhere, but that aint an issue. Multies are nice, the nameplay is dope and the content is expressed well. Keep doing your thing man.

[Yah-hah]

Thanks for the feed everyone. Wrote this like 4am as usual lol.
Yeah was just frustrated, think I'm havin an identity crisis, then I would change my idea for the song and then ended up not making it a song at all lol. Yeah like Zu said structure is insanely bad I'm quite proud of it. But yeah my best writing quality is probably emotion ya know, well aside from multis lol. But thanks for the comments, means alot everyone

[Yah-hah]

Congratulate your girl for me man, hope you two will (or had) have a nice day celebrating it.

That said, nice piece Yah, structure was everywhere and nowhere, but that aint an issue. Multies are nice, the nameplay is dope and the content is expressed well. Keep doing your thing man.

Celebrating it today so probably wont be on much, mine is tomorrow so same for tomorrow night. I'm gonna need some rest

[Spyder]

*removes pink from dick*

i liked it bro, i was the first name said

[mcZu]

*removes pink from dick*

i liked it bro, i was the first name said

He said Zu twice.

[Yah-hah]

UM thats awkward, Thanks spydie

[Yah-hah]

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Thanks man, yo gotta check out this series I did. I did 4 of em, during my angry shit. Missed a lot man where ya been.