"Released" 2nd Verse Re-mastered Waiting For Fa-Q review

[2sDay]

Protect my woman, detect something, two miles away,
You smiles today, but you dies on monday, but 2sDay,
Will forever stay, still together the day, we have to lay,
On the rusty coffin, still my trusty muffin, 'til we decay,
Happier than ever, her man forever, never be kidding,
I have the woman fever, Justin Bieber better be leaving,
Before he gets the man flu, oh that's right he's a fag too,
Immune to the effects of pussy, keep that fake swag, fool,
I'll drag you to hell, put you in my rotting cell to see if it's cool,
Drool when I see her perfect body, I really do expect naughty,
Things to happen tonight, losing sight, making me erect buddy,
Everyone's jealous, got my gun fellas, you wanna die son, tell us?,
Shut up and take the bullet, no, bulletproof vest, what's this fuss?,
Please cuss louder, or just scour, cause the hour, has started to load,
Touching her pussy, and you'll see, 2sDay, in simply psycho mode,

[Fa-Q]

I'm not saying nothin until you start returnin feed man

[Fa-Q]

Aloooot better...I see how you kept the same rhyming scheme as from 3rd verse...in my book it goes, multis, vocab, and rhyming scheme and you had all three in this...and I like how you incorporate "2sday into all three verses...good shit

[2sDay]

Aloooot better...I see how you kept the same rhyming scheme as from 3rd verse...in my book it goes, multis, vocab, and rhyming scheme and you had all three in this...and I like how you incorporate "2sday into all three verses...good shit

from now i'll return the favor by feeding all ur songs.
and thanks