D.O.N. - In My Mind

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good shit man, nice multis and flow... some of the rhymes were a little basic but still a nice drop

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some stuff you smoke screen as a multi when it's not

Songs~Of~Violence
Enforced~In~Silence

More~Doubts
All~Out

which makes me throw off the flow

pretty good piece, you seem to have widened your thoughts and feelings into it well, the Darwin line was good

you're pretty good man keep it up

If you flow the multies, they rhyme. Like audio flow.

[Edge]

some stuff you smoke screen as a multi when it's not

Songs~Of~Violence
Enforced~In~Silence

More~Doubts
All~Out

which makes me throw off the flow

pretty good piece, you seem to have widened your thoughts and feelings into it well, the Darwin line was good

you're pretty good man keep it up

If you flow the multies, they rhyme. Like audio flow.

i thought that myself

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Do I really have to say 'please'......?

No one's going to fucking give you feed if all you do is come here once in 2 weeks or whatever and then drop one verse, without feeding other people, and expect to get a shitload of feed.