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Cardboard Diaries Pt. 3

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Cardboard Diaries Pt. 3

Postby Enimee » Jan 28th, '10, 19:04

random vs. just practicin


im da illest dude eva, kill you wit 2 berrettas
shuda known not to mess wit these fellas, flyer then propellas
this beef is only feedin ma hunger, cause we be deep stuntin
fill you wit two drums, then leave the body peices in dumpstas
shout peace 2 ya mothas, then leave her with nuthin cause
we keep the hits comin, like george st. pierre punches
im real rare what is, the sum of my fears? nothin
you talkin real tough, but im willin to bet that your bluffin
me? i fuck wit true bloods, not the t.v show dude
i mean true thugs, who have the streets runnin blue
and when it comes to this rap shit,
i got the streets on lock like doc dre way back when
music still had soul, and they played hits on radios
and dudes still got hoes, and rappers still had flow
now its only a contest on who's got the biggest bank roll
well let me save the voters some time,
cause i win and still rap better then hov- in his prime

hov as in hova h o v a known as z-jay
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Re: Cardboard Diaries Pt. 3

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 28th, '10, 23:20

Prolly the best so far in this 'series'..the 4 bars after Mac Dre line were fire..I dunno about the Hov in his prime though..lol..he was a monster in his prime..

Good drop though..
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Re: Cardboard Diaries Pt. 3

Postby Enimee » Jan 29th, '10, 04:08

lol yeh preciate the feedback bro
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