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I Don't Need; Vocab

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I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 29th, '10, 05:01

All I keep hearin is “Ame, up your vocab”
No Fag..I don’t need 6 syllable words to drop a dope rap
Each punch is tactical, each story’s factual
So I don’t need a vocabulary that’s intergalactical
Im already sick as a battler
And my tracks thump with the force of a cattle herd
Mono a mono, Im known to rattle nerds
Don’t break my balls or back but I’ll fracture yours
Now see what your actions earned
A fist through your torso and your bladder churned
Hope you fruity fuckin faggots learn
I don’t need extravagant words to get you bastards burned
Keep your vocab, punches rip though it
Make ya heart beat so fast Twista wouldn’t wanna spit to it
Every last one of your scripts putrid
I can easily chew through em without my lips movin
See Im dope when Im rantin shit
So I don’t need to study The Curriculum to be Cannabis
Small words still get you toe tagged
I expose facts and one of the things I don’t need; vocab
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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby gutawafang » Jan 29th, '10, 05:02

Wow. That's fucking cool man. :worship:
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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 29th, '10, 05:14

Its wordplay fam..Canibus/Cannabis..but Cannabis is dope..double pun..


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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 29th, '10, 05:54

good peice man.

like the overall message, dont need big words for big rhyme :y:
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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 29th, '10, 06:09

I completely agree, always stood by that. Thats being said that was some good shit, nice agnry vibe to it. Diggin it for sure hella nice bro :y:
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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby Ms. Lunaverse » Jan 29th, '10, 07:18

Wow man that was some sick stuff!!!
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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby Enimee » Jan 29th, '10, 11:25

dog you finished that perfectly proz for sure
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Re: I Don't Need; Vocab

Postby AOBrien09 » Jan 29th, '10, 17:02

nice drop, like it you got nice metaphors man especially the twista line. :y:
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