A Battle Verse

[JoshButler]

a new kid on the block
step up u gonna get shot
with a lyrical glock
get back behind docks
and cum in your socks
hold onto your cocks
now im spittin
all none written
im typin its hot pippin
like billy pipers pussy fire
they call me a sire
go to the choir
to pick up ur breathe pace
ur left without a trace
float upto the gates
of heaven
no haven
cause i did the severn
deadly sins
lust of girls
when there partyin in my featses
on there faces
as you know hades eats babys
fine you wanna punch line
i drop my cock
in your mums slot
she cum swapped
with ur filthy sister

[JoshButler]

ok any good crtisism? it was a no thinkin rhyme