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Truth.

Postby Low Key » Jan 30th, '10, 17:09

rappers nowadays spit venom like a factory
it's a pity that most of the spitting aint actually
factually correct but to me it comes naturally ..
my flow is slow so that people make a mockery
and wherever i go people there are onto socking me
it's shocking me how my soccer boss keeps dropping me
when i'm kicking rhymes harder than rocky b ..
honestly, the fact that rap is dropping is stopping me
from becoming this unstoppable rhyming kid prodigy ..
i bear weights on top of me, but it will never topple me
'cause i got the bottle, see how i'm rhyming like novelty?
none of you can match it, the flow's in my inheritance
if you battled me i'd make you look stupider than americans
you can't match the back of me, i'm baffling
my words are playing with your mind like cricketers battling
it's happening. i'll be greater then led zeppelin
you better start settling if you want my head levelling
'cause if i blow, reddening, trust me you will never win
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Re: Truth.

Postby Low Key » Jan 30th, '10, 17:50

Coleon wrote:pretty okay stuff....isn't Low Key a famous UK rapper?


dno about 'famous' but he's good.
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Re: Truth.

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '10, 19:30

I thought that was pretty nice. Another writer here on this forum worth keeping lol :y: Smooth flow and multies, nothing too complex you just kept it real :y:

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