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My Best Friend

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My Best Friend

Postby Low Key » Jan 30th, '10, 14:41

[spoken]
girl .. you're so beautiful, you deserve a beautiful song
and with this one, i just wanna find what's on your mind
and tell you how i feel babes, look ..

[hook]
i just want, to see you, all the time babes
'cause you, are always, on my mind babes
i just want, to be that guy babes
the guy that get's to call you mine babes [x2]

i could hold you close and we could watch the night sky
and i could write you notes that prove that i'm the right guy
yeah, you know i love you most, i'm missing you at night time
and i'd do anything to get you here by my side
so you can understand how i feel, you don't reply
i'm staring at my phone and i feel i'm gonna cry
the distance is hard and sometimes i wanna die
'cause sometimes i worry that you're on another guy
it's hard to believe that i'm gonna win this race
i'm starting to lose pace, i'm running out of space
in my heart to erase the part that i need to replace
i see it in your face that i mean a lot to you
but at the same time i just don't know what to do

[hook]
i want to see you, all the time babes
'cause you are always on my mind babes
i just want to be that guy babes
the guy that get's to call you mine babes [x2]

when we were together girl we never had a fight
i said it was forever so you truly were surprised
when i ran off with another girl, and left you there to cry
it's always in my mind playing back like a tape
and sometimes i cry, 'cause it's more than i can take
but you would be surprised how much longer i can wait
just to be with you again, just to hear your little laugh
forgive me for the past, 'cause i'm pouring out my heart
you ran to the bottom of the field i had to chase you
slipping in the grass i got to you your face was vacant
i was out of breathe and you looked me in the eye
and made me promise to you there, that it was just "you and i"
and to this very day i still regret that stupid lie!

[hook]
i want to see you, all the time babes
'cause you are always on my mind babes
i just want to be that guy babes
the guy that get's to call you mine babes [x2]
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Re: My Best Friend

Postby *MIRANDA* » Jan 30th, '10, 16:31

really liked it
good job :flower:
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Re: My Best Friend

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 30th, '10, 21:01

Good shit man I actually dug it. Got a nice vibe to it :y:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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