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Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:09

The product of boredom :smoking:

Take your walls n smash it, im always causin havoc
My delivery is across the atlas like Santa Clauses magic
If you forgot who Class is then im goona off the fascists
Put you in your coffin fastest to see you rot in caskets
I'll always saw n slash his brain when I draw the axes
My paws are massive, they'll have you thrown across the attic
My claws have gashes that will create an awesome graphic
This is automatic on every track I cock and blast it
Your loss was tragic but you paid the cost of passage
I brought the baddest to take out these closet faggots
I'm on the attack its making every song a classic
The applause is habit, given without a thought or fact its
Crazy how distraught this rap is, some good but a lot ot mask it
It's like were all a captive, banged like were caught in rapids
Each bar is acid to crumble all as soft as ashes
I'm lost in madness, my heart is cold the frost has grasped it
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby Solace » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:21

So now I get to see the finished product? That was real dope, tight flow and obviously good use of multies. Good check to see how many multies you can do. I wouldn't have even thought of half of those :y:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:24

Haha thanks :worship:

And this isn't nearly as good as your syllable shit cole :flutter:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby em-j » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:27

it would be nice to hear it too :D as in really hear it :D
Sing with me, sing for the year,
Sing for the laughter, sing for the tear,
Sing with me,just for today,
Maybe tomorrow, the good Lord will take you away..
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:28

em-j wrote:it would be nice to hear it too :D as in really hear it :D


maybe soon ;)
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby Spyder » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:42

shit was dope

obv goin for just multies and only a few were just to rhyme
99% made perfect sense and all that so word up :y:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:54

Thanks Cole again and spyder :worship:

ps when is that track comin :angry:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:58

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Thanks Cole again and spyder :worship:

ps when is that track comin :angry:


I wrote 2 verses for Spyder last night lmao

I'm just procrastinating I guess :sweating:


oh i totally forgot about that track :laughing:

That comment was toward Spyder, but yeah you too Cole :shakehead:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby Spyder » Feb 2nd, '10, 02:59

wtf track u talkin bout

i got two with Class unreleased :o

and Cole thats comin...


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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 03:00

Spyder wrote:wtf track u talkin bout

i got two with Class unreleased :o

and Cole thats comin...


and Magic Clothes forever cat


The 5 Star Generals Track...ive given up on my verse from MTM. I'm goona completely re-write it
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby Spyder » Feb 2nd, '10, 03:01

omg :shakehead: so undependable :smoking:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 03:03

Spyder wrote:omg :shakehead: so undependable :smoking:


sorry :'(

But on Immortal Kombat who was dependable :whistle:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby Spyder » Feb 2nd, '10, 04:09

:laughing:

Solace and Cole be slackin tits :shakehead:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 2nd, '10, 06:24

Was terrible dude way too many unecessary multis..........................................................................LMAO naw just fuckin with ya was real nice bro. I like this kind of stuff man really dope. Good shit homie :y:
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Re: Multis Galore

Postby classthe_king » Feb 2nd, '10, 12:33

Thanks Yah :worship:
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