just a couple of lines

[JoshButler]

i suggest that this mothafucka stepping to me should stick to his scrpits
cause this pranksta has all his rhymes on his body with his wrists
slit like his momma's clit as soon as he was dropped
your minds a blood clot and bout to get shot coz
your nothing no one will even see you on this stage
your erased like the 5 times you tried to spit on a page
fag dont it just seem that you always make a fuckin mistake
wait ask your parents they will say "our task is to condem this
hey u still gay?"

[Edge]

i suggest that this mothafucka stepping to me should stick to his scrpits
cause this pranksta has all his rhymes on his body with his wrists
slit like his momma's clit as soon as he was dropped
your minds a blood clot and bout to get shot coz
your nothing no one will even see you on this stage
your erased like the 5 times you tried to spit on a page
fag dont it just seem that you always make a fuckin mistake
wait ask your parents they will say "our task is to condem this
hey u still gay?"

throw in some multis to your rhymes, and the structure needs to be better... on a positive note, ur new and will grow and i like the rhyme scheme... just add multis, fix the structure and add some punches/wordplay