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I Would Still Want You (inspired by Fa-Q)

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I Would Still Want You (inspired by Fa-Q)

Postby Medicine Ball » Feb 18th, '10, 20:32

i know it's a complete rip off and that Fa-Q was the first to do it, but i just wanted to have a go at a very similar concept. it ended up being more emotional than i thought.

if you grew wings and tried to fly away
so high away, or if you died today, i would still want you
if you lost your legs 'cause someone drop kicked your head
and put you in a hos-pi-tal bed, i would still want you
if you lied and cheated, with a guy you greeted
at a secret silent meeting, i would still want you

girl ... if you stopped our plans
and let go of my hand, i'd understand
and ... if you dropped our trust
and said it was only lust, and go i must, i'd understand

if you left me tomorrow, and left me ... solo
if you dropped me from high, and left me so low, i would still want you
girl ... if you made me cry
i know the tears would never dry, and whilst i'm still alive, i would still want you ..

girl ... if you stopped our plans
and let go of my hand, i'd understand
and ... if you dropped our trust
and said it was only lust, and go i must, i'd understand


credit to Fa-Q for the inspiration.
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