My freestyle, my outburst!

[Banks]

I know it will not rhyme at all, because I'm Brazilian, the rhymes are in Portuguese, so I translated it into English, so you can read the text and evaluate the contents. Comment please! Please do not comment stupid things, I did it seriously.

In Portuguese Br [ my idioma ]

Me sinto como se a rua e o bairro inteiro estivesse contra mim
Confesso que nunca em nenhuma ocasião eu me senti assim
A sociedade criticando, impondo seus padroes e leis
Como se nao tivessem corações eles se sentem como reis

Meus Deus isso me atormenta, me incomoda mas eu irei continuar
Sei que é um amor proibido mas nunca deixarei de te amar
Sou 4 anos mais velho do que você, me sinto caindo de uma escada
Mesmo você ja tendo um corpo mais adulto e uma mente bem avançada

Gostaria de achar uma resposta, algo que me fizesse relaxar
Pois eu ja durmo e acordo, nao consigo parar de pensar...
...Em você, tudo me faz lembrar de ti, meu amor
Isso pode soar muito sentimental mas a paixão é suficiente pra aliviar a dor

Tenho fé e esperança que um dia tudo vai ficar oficial
E eu terei a permissao que preciso e nada mais pra mim será mal
Essas palavras são apenas pra desabafar um pouco, nada tao importante pra quem lê
Mas concerteza isso tem um imenso valor para "Eu e você"

Alguem pode estar achando tudo isso muito idiota
Mas se eu te amo e voce me ama, ja basta, só isso me importa
Foda-se o que os outros pensam, nós vamos sim continuar juntos
Um amor tao forte assim nao acaba por qualquer assunto



In english

I feel like the street and the whole neighborhood was against me
I confess that I never at any time I felt like
Criticizing society, imposing their standards and laws
As if they had hearts they feel like kings

My God that torments me, it bothers me but I will continue
I know it is a forbidden love but never stop loving you
I'm 4 years older than you, I'm falling from a ladder
Even if you are already taking a more mature body and a mind well advanced

I would like to find an answer, something that made me relax
Because I already sleep and wake, can not stop thinking ...
... In you, everything reminds me of you, my love
This may sound very sentimental but the passion is enough to relieve the pain

I have faith and hope that one day everything will be official
And I will have the permission I need and nothing more for me to be ill
These words are just to vent a little, nothing so important for those who read
But surely it has an immense value to "You and me"

Someone may think all this very silly
But if I love you and you love me, enough already, that's all I care
Fuck what others think, but we'll stay together
A love so strong so not just any subject

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Oh man. I'm so happy to finally have someone write in their native language in creative writing.
This is awesome, both the flow and the meaning were great.
Do you ever record? If yes, I love to hear music in other languages, so maybe post something in audio.
Either way, keep writing and posting, because I get sick of pieces all done in English.

I'm curious: How different is Brazilian Portuguese from European Portuguese? If you spoke with a person from Portugal, would you two be able to understand each other well enough to have a conversation?

[Fa-Q]

What language is this?

[Fa-Q]

Wooow I'm retarded...k well I gotta ask does it rhyme in your language...its got good meaning but doesn't rhyme...

[Banks]

Oh man. I'm so happy to finally have someone write in their native language in creative writing.
This is awesome, both the flow and the meaning were great.
Do you ever record? If yes, I love to hear music in other languages, so maybe post something in audio.
Either way, keep writing and posting, because I get sick of pieces all done in English.

I'm curious: How different is Brazilian Portuguese from European Portuguese? If you spoke with a person from Portugal, would you two be able to understand each other well enough to have a conversation?

First, thanks to evaluate my freestyle, thank you. I do not want to record it, it's just to vent!

To answer your question:

The Brazilian and European portugês is almost the same, 85% the same, the accent is different. Tranquilamete I can talk with a person who speaks the Portuguese European, is the same thing, there is little difference, very little.

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

What language is this?

Haha

It says In Portuguese in bold.

I asked him about the Portuguese language...

You don't have to be a detective to figure it out.

Yes, it does rhyme in his language.

[Banks]

What language is this?

Brazilian portuguese homie!

[Banks]

Wooow I'm retarded...k well I gotta ask does it rhyme in your language...its got good meaning but doesn't rhyme...

only rhyme in my language, but what do you think of the content of the text itself?