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Life in Lyrics keystyle

Postby Spyder » Feb 27th, '10, 01:16

Tired of writing with recycled thoughts, writers block
Hypin drops like my life will stop if this site don’t pop.
My flows old, my style so cold drop response below O
Battle mode like that’ll show I got the game in a chokehold.
Gotta step to movin, follow Darwin get to evolution
This test is stress inducin goin forward seein less improvement.
A pest, a nuisance every breath im losin I quiver and shake
Til I wither and break, hearts a pin and you tripped the grenade.
Missile is aimed at my ribs and its cage, this life im preachin
Is joked in rhymes but I choke sometimes over defeat when,
Rappins your life, you try to grasp every problem you have
This is my air see, no wonder im clutchin the oxygen mask.
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Re: Life in Lyrics keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Feb 27th, '10, 01:23

really nice i know what you mean about responses on TR slim to none

overall really great Key :y: :y:


Til I wither and break, hearts a pin and you tripped the grenade.
Missile is aimed at my ribs and its cage, this life im preachin
Is joked in rhymes but I choke sometimes over defeat when,
Rappins your life, you try to grasp every problem you have
This is my air see, no wonder im clutchin the oxygen mask. :worship:
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Re: Life in Lyrics keystyle

Postby Spyder » Feb 27th, '10, 03:07

thanks silver :y:
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Re: Life in Lyrics keystyle

Postby shadyfreakzul » Feb 27th, '10, 10:43

Spyder wrote:thanks silver :y:

whats a keystyle?
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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