Random flow

[LLockhart86]

(im me instrumental)
Chronic in my lungs, in my throat, on my gums/
on my teeth, on my tounge, what the fuck have I become/
What the fuck have I done, better yet, what am I gunna do/
Meanwhile hittin up my friend to smoke a blunt or two/
nothin new, same shit just a different day/
Worry bout my problems while I go to roll another J/
Stuff it, lick it, light it then I blow them all away/
But I had a bunch of pills, now i only caught a case/
Thats a felony charge, 3 years probation/
Ween of all the drugs, no rehab, just patience/
Pacin in my trailer, hatin the fact that I got to face this/
Always thinking "right about now, I could be wasted/

choppy, havent written in a long time

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

"What the fuck have I done, better yet, what am I gunna do/"

No matter what I try, I can't keep this line in time relative to the remainder of the piece. I'd recommend shortening it.
Other than that, it was brutally honest and didn't have too bad of a flow.

[LLockhart86]

Meanwhile in the next line is spit slower to take up more time in the bar....

thanks