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Quick 8

Postby psu24 » Mar 11th, '10, 06:54

im crushin' backs in with raps packed with baseball bats bitch
ive had it up to here its clear, i'm fuckin weird theres so many cadavers
in my attic im a addict for flesh, intrest-
-ed in the the blood of my enemies when I get it i'll rest
My plan is to brandish an automatic, splatter the blood then use the same hand to make a sandwich.
My nine makes contact with your stomach, your ribs get to smashin
You hit the fuckin casket while I sit back laughin reminiscing how this all happened
How tragedy struck the faggot he ain't shit now fuckin with me he'd rather wish he hadn't.
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Re: Quick 8

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 11th, '10, 06:58

Not bad, but nothing special.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
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Re: Quick 8

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 11th, '10, 07:00

Not bad. A quick 8 is like diet RedBull...really, what's the point. Lol I'm just yankin your chain, I'm tired as balls
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Re: Quick 8

Postby psu24 » Mar 11th, '10, 07:03

Fa-Q wrote:Not bad. A quick 8 is like diet RedBull...really, what's the point. Lol I'm just yankin your chain, I'm tired as balls


Ha same i just typed this out in a few minutes but I'll be droppin some more shit on here soon.
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Re: Quick 8

Postby Solace » Mar 18th, '10, 02:15

Fa-Q wrote:Not bad. A quick 8 is like diet RedBull...really, what's the point. Lol I'm just yankin your chain, I'm tired as balls

Lmfaoo.

Hate your structure oh so much. Your multies seem very average, 2 syllables. But yeah, I cant comment much until I see more bro. Will be looking out for ya drops psu. :y:
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