Coleon - Infinitum Feat. Magician

[Fa-Q]

Co, you Renegade'd this Magician kid...liked your verse but not so much his

[classthe_king]

Dang lol, your verse was crazy. You keeping that rhyme pattern up the whole time was great. I liked this much better

I didn't like other guy though. His first bar was dope but everything after that sucked.

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

You were working much more magic than this... supposed magician.

[UzaKING]

Dam good job how long have you been writing?

[DƎRDYPK]

loving your verse Cole
the rhyme pattern was nicccceeee
other guy was iight

[classthe_king]

Alright constructive criticisim
I would like to see him use some better rhyme like his first bar.

For you, the main problem for me was the flow. When I was trying to figure it out I had alot of weird pauses and rapping fast. Expecially with this line: I refute your religion, from scratch I became
I could never get it to sound right. But I have no clue how you rap it so it could be perfect.

[classthe_king]

I'll check it

[classthe_king]

oh and the Henrietta Lacks thing I mentioned

read this http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henrietta_Lacks very cool stuff

saw it on TV not too long ago

You're like Prince Ea now, teaching people through your rap

[classthe_king]

Shit bro, Prince Ea is like ME

N.igga please


I loved when he was talking about that though. I started Lol'ing in the middle of class when he goes "What the fuck is a teserat"

[mcZu]

You have matured as an artist Cole, I regret not reading some of your latest projects. Been to busy, so sorry for that. But that verse right there, shows why you can define yourself as an artist.

Magician's verse was dope, nothing really to complain about. So what if he didn't use that much multies, his verse was a coherent of phrases, it fits perfectly.

Nice piece.

[Arabian Shady]

magicians flow was absolutely ridiculous-i mean that in the best way possible.
i thought his lyrics and flow were excellent

It took me a while to understand your flow-like class said,BUT your lyrics were quite superior.
Oh and that wiki link made that bar make soooo much more sense , i read it and was like wtf?! but for real, i think your verse flowed wicked

Good stuff ya'll