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HIP HOP - this is the type of topics i touch on

Postby Ticalrecords » Apr 18th, '10, 17:58

I wrote this to Joell Ortiz's HIP HOP, this beat gives you the ability to stretch ur lines out if u kno wut i mean... btw i bet its embarressing to admit to getting inspiration from school textbooks...but i do...frequently. shits wierd. anyways PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK. seriously, i get one comment on each drop and its from the same fuckin person!! (ima make a song addressing tht...). not that i dont apreciate the feedback tht i do get (FAQ) but everyone else needs to step up to the plate ya diigs.



aww man im done with grade school,
shiiit i remember the first time i was given a blunt to blaze thruough/
the first piece of advice i got was not to niggerlip,
we sparked and passed it till it was too hot for fingertips/
HELL YEAH we wu tang that shit! -
meeting stoners was like finding a friend to speak your culture's foreign language with/
man we went from misfits interested,
in doing nothing but smoking to veterans with perspective/
now aint that a beautiful transformation -
from acid head to an artist who practices musical ad verbatim/
haha call it musical masterbation - see this is for my own pleasure,
ya cant fuck with this haha you should have known better/

HOOK
HIP HOP! god damn i love it, fuck teh police, parents and the public!
maaan all i wanna do is make music , live life exclusiv-ly rayclusive/
HIP HOP - i rhyme for the love of it, symbolism of a cultural monolith,
HIP HOP maaan im the new kid asking, aint nothin but som fuckin music blasting? HIP HOP
god damn i love it, fuck teh police, parents and the public! maaan all i wanna do is make music , live life exclusiv-ly rayclusive//


AWW man now remember your first blunt of chronic,
and how you thought to yourself this shit is ill mids got nothin on this!/
you said im willing to pay for quality cuz weed made me honest,
so now theres a demand for the growers to raise THC content/
but any industry that a business corrupts,
is like teh prostitute that every law abiding citizen fucks/
aWW maan i know its just as frustrating, but i think we can agree that this big business's dick has suffered enough chaffing/
yea red raw so fuck the invisible hand that spurs the economy,
that shits been too busy beatin off to fix shit we deserve an apology/
psshh u republicans and ur invisible hand theory, yeah well thats was my dick-in-the-hand theory, clearly, i must be teh one nearly, out of brain cells/
somehow im always on track - what can i say? i went from training wheels and im now on train wheels/ :smoking:


i emit raw flows when confronted in wartime. (has nothin to do w the song, i jus think its half clever)
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Re: HIP HOP - this is the type of topics i touch on

Postby Ticalrecords » Apr 23rd, '10, 03:26

BUMP. wtf guys come on, throw me a damn bone, at least a thumbs up or thumbs down.
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