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Practice verse #5

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 22:43

Another verse I did while waiting on some bud.....
same subject as the other verses...absolutely nothing
but theres lil pieces in there about me that will teach you a few things


My boy Riga J told me "Always Keep It Kreep"
Ever since then I made mixtapes to sweep the street
on that "PK" mixtape I learned to freak a beat
"My Munchies" was a ringtone for every little geek
inside of high school & middle school everybody had it
it's weird how everbody loves me when they used to call me faggot
but you know what I'm past that, these kiddies ate my crap rap
& now their bumping Lil Wayne.....is it better or worse? let's ask that
it don't matter they don't know about The Freestyle Files
& let's be honest everybody knows my keystyle's wild
just imagine PK if he made it in the big time
I'd be a sellout hoe...but would it matter? I'm the rich kind
naw fuck that...I bust raps for the underground
I could spit a verse to wake the dead & bring thunder down
I'm the one of kind, mastermind, ending the verse with a faster rhyme
I care less about your crew, what you do, & which one of you bastards whine



yes I know that Underground & Thunder Down have been used before by Eminem :coffee:
but I really don't care....this is a practice verse I did real quick...
who cares if I used a rhyme someone used before who probly used it after hearing someone else use it
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Re: Practice verse #5

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 5th, '10, 17:11

The audio's coming soon ;)
I'v just recently got back on that writing tip :smoking:
1st single should be out in June... :shifty:
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Re: Practice verse #5

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 5th, '10, 17:20

viewtopic.php?f=54&t=79977&start=0

the 2 Mixtapes in that thread are the only thing's I'v put out since being on TR
2 more mixtapes are coming though :shifty:
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