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Postby mcZu » May 7th, '10, 00:15

Someting to get back on the writing saddle, pause. You can call it a throwaway verse if you like.

I was lying dormant in Morocco, no more luck no
I put trust in my skills like the Gestapo
Fuck no, it aint the same like calling a burrito a taco
Unique though like an Egyptian beehive filled with mosquito
Noise, no choice, obviously perseverant
Persuasive Persian serum made-
By the mind, so ignorance here can sit near the-
Blind, reading so why do they seek this forgiveness
My mind is my business so mind your own business
This busyness is busy, so my level is ridiculous
It’s just distance, I differ myself from the others
Difference is, me, myself, is like Cain’s brother
Able, to shock in a rap, like a cable when I utter
Brain is beyond stable, my brain a stable
Holding an animal with an insane label
‘cause I position myself different, be grateful
No position ever possessed is the same, no
So, if you seek someone to blame for-
Murder, you won’t know if tomorrow comes, ask Maino
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Postby classthe_king » May 7th, '10, 00:25

Hmmmmm, it was alright. I probably didn't get like half of it though. I didn't really like the rhyming.
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Postby mcZu » May 7th, '10, 00:26

Thanks for feeding, Sentus.
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