Strategist’s Journal

[mcZu]

I can be quite lethal when bringing my point across like a cathedral
Attack so swift it’ll look a sequel of twenty people
I’ve got a wider field of view like a peep hole
Officially it seems they all move E like Vevo, as you can see, though
They won’t see me coming like fucking a blind girl incognito
I’ll be coming for blood like female mosquitoes
To bring that fire you’ll need a hell mitt like Magneto
They’re like 1 outta 52 a year ‘cause they all act feeble
I tried to watch them over time like Nakamura Hiro
But they tried to cover up the hard truth like a burqa deep throat
‘cause I’m Ibn Khaldun in the flesh with this literature
These fake emcees are as straight as a scimitar
Sour murder he wrote, straight to the cemetery with vinegar
Cement on their scalps, ‘cause I’m a hardhead Dillinger
This pioneer breaks bars with his sound waves ask a listener
That’s why I’m far from lazy like that eye of Christopher
I’m more concentrated than when Schindler’s List occurred
I’m leaning towards being sick like mixing up some bliss Sizzurp

[classthe_king]

Dang zu, one of the best punchline pieces ive ever read from you. That was really good.

[Fa-Q]

Coming for blood like female mosquitoes...good line, and good drop Zu

[mcZu]

Thanks Class and Fa-Q, appreciate it.

[Tash8]

They won’t see me coming like fucking a blind girl incognito

lmaooo

but yo, quit with using the word "like" that gets annoying quick

[mcZu]

Thanks for the feed Tash.

[gutawafang]

It seems like you like "war" and "violence" to be your topic, Zu. But it's good man. You put it across pretty well here. Flow could be improved a lot. Rhymes were all good. Good vocab too.