Trying something new.. Hmm?

[Block]

Didn't write this to a beat because it's not really something I write, lol. I just wanted to fuck around and see how it came out since I was bored tonight. Some feed would be cool, haha.


Embedded with some, of the worst thoughts that a demon could have,
I could breathe in the glass that should have shredded these lungs
but even that as a snack will never be the end of me son,
I grab energy from, and distant knowledge through
acidic molecules that would appear in a leaded thermis
and clearly I said it perfect.. The type of liquid
that Jim Jones would spike his kids with,
This shit's known for searing your epidermis...
I'm, the Son Of Sam crossbred with Ghandi and Jesus
Gobbling Fetus'..Easy when you cross me,
I'll crossbreed with Dahmer and eat ya
meet up, then feed your army to these fucks for cheap thrills..
An abomination of digested feet, guts and weak skill,
I mean plus I'm just a dick in the flesh..
circumcized.. sick with tourettes..
I would say anything to get you in bed,
With a lit cigarette stench, of burnt skin
that works in, to the vision of sex..
Listen I'm blessed, test me I'm a titan that's reborn
throw'n rings of saturn at oppenents, igniting their weak form,
all the while grasping a power that is surging deep,
certainly overowering your circuitry with no lightning or lead cord
It's top notch, and C-4, is likened to pop-rocks if popped off, in my presence..
Horrendous in fashion, infact did I mention the Mansons
even deemed me the bad guy...
apocolyptic magi equipped with a samurai frying a bag tied,
full of silver tongues..
Spilling some, as bait for my victims that love to hate..
My lovely games make Wayne Gacy seem righteous and sain
A saint, rightly insane.. The pain brightens my day..
I portray my speech carved through a raven's beak,
It's darker than shades of green your face will see
after I plague the streets, with a grotesque
grope-fest of raping teens and ladie's screams..
I made a scene that may have seemed despicable, cowardly..
but outwardly I leave a smile,
you'd need a vial with the ghost of every theif and child
and wild biblical scholars to fiddle for hours
with a ouija board, some holy water on easter isle
while deciphering the infinite power of the scriptures
depicted and written within..
dripping with sin and rusting, I had rose from the sod
clutching, to life with a boastful jihad and moses's Rod..
The reincarnation of those who were wronged,
twisted and mixed with Noah and Ra.. no facade
you notice he's odd??? a notice to God..
I devised the algorithms that would start parting the seas,
so pardon me but that throne is mine,
and I've, shown through time that I,
or atleast part of me has known divine, structure..
For the last time.. Fuck you.



I fed fa-q's peice.

[Xray]

That was fucking insane man. It was dope from start to finish. The flow was flawless, and the rhymes just kept getting better and better as they went on. Loved it tbh, this will sound sick in audio. Def keep investing in this "new" shit, new ideas are the key to dope shit. Dope drop homie.

[Audi]

Could tell this wasn't your niche but still alright. The Saturn's rings line was mind pleasing. Your other style is mature and you pull it off really well where here it came off more adolescent. Good use of vocabulary and you touched on a wide variety of topics. Your rhyme schemes shined, though I didn't like some of the one's without matching end rhymes. Good flow and nice multies. Keep it up.

[Fa-Q]

Crazy Rhyme Scheme on deck....so many quotable lines

acidic molecules that would appear in a leaded thermis
and clearly I said it perfect.. The type of liquid
that Jim Jones would spike his kids with,


you'd need a vial with the ghost of every theif and child
and wild biblical scholars to fiddle for hours
with a ouija board, some holy water on easter isle

Just a couple....but damn this was hot

[Block]

@sajjad - Thanks bro. Looking forward to the collabo, haha.

Could tell this wasn't your niche but still alright. The Saturn's rings line was mind pleasing. Your other style is mature and you pull it off really well where here it came off more adolescent. Good use of vocabulary and you touched on a wide variety of topics. Your rhyme schemes shined, though I didn't like some of the one's without matching end rhymes. Good flow and nice multies. Keep it up.

I agree with you as far as the maturity of style goes. To be honest, this was a far-reach for me, musically. I just wanted to see if my talent extended to this type of wrting. It's easy to stay in your 'box', so to speak, and never venture out into the other sub-genres; But that's what makes artists lose touch, in my opinion. I have to agree with Sajjad that new ideas and new thought processes are the key to recreating yourself and continuously creating dope material.

@Fa-q - Thanks man. Glad you liked it.

Thanks again to all of you for the feed.

[classthe_king]

I don't really know how to feed this lol, I thought it was good but I wasn't really feeling the rhyme scheme for text, who knows for audio, it's probably dope lol. I just don't have really anything constructive to say because I don't have as much experience as you so anything I could say you already know. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say lol, I'm pretty sleep deprived and can't think well. Probably why I didn't understand half this verse.

[Block]

Haha. I don't know what to say to that, bro.. The verse is kinda abstract but on some bragging / canibus / necro type shit. I mentioned alot of serial killers and different events. I'm sure if you read it again you could understand.

[Enimee]

im feelin the multis, it was poorly organized and what not but fuck the bull shit that was dope, some of ur ideas werent completed and it seemd like u were strechin at times but it was long and piled full of sick imagery, mad vocab, and ridiculous multis shit was intense no doubt good work man
my favorite part

I mean plus I'm just a dick in the flesh..
circumcized.. sick with tourettes..
I would say anything to get you in bed,
With a lit cigarette stench, of burnt skin
that works in, to the vision of sex..

[Block]

Thanks for the feed. Do you mind explaining, or giving an example to, which lines weren't complete thoughts?

As for stretching, do you mean rhyme schemes or concepts? If by rhyme schemes, do you mean this bit?

and clearly I said it perfect.. The type of liquid
that Jim Jones would spike his kids with,
This shit's known for searing your epidermis...

If so, I can see how you would think a rhyme scheme like that was stretched, but if written with the right amount of internals, if comes off very clean on an instrumental.

Again, thanks though.

[classthe_king]

Sorry I was really tired the other day and I'm smacked right now so I don't wanna read it now haha. I'll read it tommorow. Also could you help me with htis ahha.

Robby says:
I don't feel like being lyrical anymore
omar says:
What do you feel like being
lol
Robby says:
Idk
Multis and punchlines are boring
They're too easy
omar says:
Lol you tired of the punchline game
Robby says:
I can do it without trying anymore, the last two verses I did in less than 20 minutes and didn't put in any effort
I don't feel like giving effort to make something like that
omar says:
oh woe is me woe is me
Robby says:
nah
Not like that
omar says:
then what lol
Robby says:
iunno

[Yah-hah]

First off it seems alot of us CW'rs are goin through phases of wanting to try some new shit. I really enjoyed this one. Some very dope lines and concepts. I liked the ravens beak thing. and as for the flow this
Listen I'm blessed, test me I'm a titan that's reborn
throw'n rings of saturn at oppenents, igniting their weak form,
all the while grasping a power that is surging deep,
certainly overowering your circuitry with no lightning or lead cord

I completely get this flow almost perfectly, (I been listening to Spoonfull alot lately he's mad dope with a different flow) I have a different flow too and I think I see how you do it. It's actually similar to Fa-Q's flow you both just arrange it differently. He often makes it look like only 1 line rhymes with itself lol. You both finish rhymes in places normal flows don't But I have the same thing. We all use multis/inners all that to keep the flow on track. But yeah man dope concepts whole thing was a cool read

[Block]

Thanks guys. Ummm, what do you mean by help you with that, class? You lost me, bro.. lol.

Yah, Isn't spoon the shit? That's why he's my favorite rapper apart from slug. If I've ever "bitten" anything from an artist, it's his flow. It's crazy unique and I desperately wanted to learn it, so I did.

That's the main reason people can't catch my flow alot of the times, is because it's like his and pauses in crazy spots.


Again, I appreciate all of the feed. It means alot.

[nickolas_warner]

Wow that flows together great. Really awesome man.