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Re: nothing special

Postby dadeem » Dec 10th, '10, 16:10

My sword in my sheeth
A cord 'tween my teeth
I wanna say this fore I leave
I’m like hell with this reeves
And as ye can see
I can rap, and also lead it
Do a lap ‘fore ye read it, for ye get it
Now lend me rhyme before the camera, cause Imma samurai, sammuray, same difference hurray, just athought of him and him, a delay makes me switch like eminem, mister jim, I hate you because of what you did, fuckin slut I hope you die, right now and come back as vanilla ice his son and walk around the rest of ye life kicked on and hit and spit with shit, woops just did, cases break in like when Ja rule fucked eminem… sorry buddy but I cant lie, or my big toe will grow like wow! So big! Ye toe look at it!, it’s growin to an extent, so pretend you accuse, man you amuse me, just like muse-E, in a museum, stand up kid like mew 2? Ooh but you didn’t know pain has a price too, put the devil in a stew, with stewie as a cook swimmin through the puke. Due to the M-show he blew, which I listened too, I think it was the best of the rest, off course infinite was the first and lest time you stole sum snoop, fuck you , oh but is you me? Or is that the truth D? twelve, is one two-three bitches with insanity , OK now the next verse my whole crew, is me Dude, the whole universe due to mewto who fucked you oops repeatin myself, time to start with some new RHYMES, like busta rhymes, who hurts you two times the M twho times the M, that’s when Eminem thought or did he had a thought, what thought? That sought, when He sawed off a shotgun, The boss dog is rough fun, but when I get cuffed on, then my stuff gets un un-dressed, un un jizzed, un un broken glass, midlife crisis night token, that’s you’re life taken to thé kao-ken, don’t look too sunny or ye get a color stare. Then came the SOLAR FLARE!!now say ah, say ah, cause I’m comin with KAMEHA-MEHA, this ku’s so crazy.Oh did D mention he erazed the Go in God n Goku, GOD don’t you want to blow through… don’t you want to skip through my rhymes like a real cow, but how? how did he know how to fuck And get buzzed at the same time, what a timing, this rHyming, IS timing, I’m fine in here and outta here, so get me outta here before the sunrise of obie twice, bring delight, Bring D-lite, like It feels like the sunlight, or was it moonlight…, now it’s tonight, soon light, will begin to fight with fright in time the lightning will become frightning, sigh, bye bye the rhyme is over now need to cry, or I will buy some more time to rhyme, like when the knight of darkness brings uptight sparkness youngster and tell’s you bout the loch ness monster, or whas it an original gangster, A reggeaton thanker, me be very cold rapper, the most adept and skilled with raps filled, He ís cool, and he rules, so no secrecy, it’s just me, Freak MC da D.

this was the last rap I wrote, hope ye like it, comments please!
Ik sta pas op als de trein stopt
Dus pas op als ik een lijn drop
Als een paspop doe je net alsof
En dan vind jenet grof als ik zeg dat ik je pop
Ik ontplof, twee kogels door je kop
Ik tover je om tot stof zo van hop!
En dan wil je dat ik stop
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Re: nothing special

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 10th, '10, 19:03

umm... dude i like it, it's unique but should be written longer!!!!!!!!!!!!! :b:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: nothing special

Postby dadeem » Dec 13th, '10, 15:28

Ka0t1c wrote:umm... dude i like it, it's unique but should be written longer!!!!!!!!!!!!! :b:



Isn't it long enough??
wuddyamean...

and which part DID you like?

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Ik sta pas op als de trein stopt
Dus pas op als ik een lijn drop
Als een paspop doe je net alsof
En dan vind jenet grof als ik zeg dat ik je pop
Ik ontplof, twee kogels door je kop
Ik tover je om tot stof zo van hop!
En dan wil je dat ik stop
dadeem
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