what it is

by **Ka0t1c** » Dec 23rd, '10, 23:29

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nobody around even knows who i am in this nutty town
of alabama but i hold it down from where i've landed
so i'm no longer homeward bound, it's all good now
i swear i won't panic, i'm going for gold now
i won't sweat it, i'm ready to set the tone down
At college i'm gonna get credits
but i'll always stay holdin my fort down
cuz in this world i'm a soldier
and i'll be damned the government would hold down
i won't be told how to support myself
you may judge me in court but i'm no elf
or some sort of small short clown
i always hunger something more out
of orbit before i'm cornered and clouded by horror
because i count for a tomorrow
but it's prolly a disorder to wanna
be reborn more towards pointin northbound
so you warlords, put your swords down
then gargoyles, sound the horns loud
my target's to blow these doors down
right now i'm growing my horns out
with full force to tear your walls down
til my roaring vocal cords are too soar to shout
what my story's about

by **RealSickLindley** » Dec 29th, '10, 00:52

I'm really in to my structure and flow with pieces, and this was reallly nice, i love pieces where i actually enjoy following it more than whats actually being said. I mean, i could obviously say 'have better content', but this wasn't one of those kind of pieces, so just keep up man :y: