Final 32

[classthe_king]

I wasn't goona post this but a couple people said they wanted to see the final version.

A lot of people think that this rappin’s a joke
But I put my heart and soul into craftin my flow
I keep the dream alive cause I’m graspin to hope
And if you feed me some lies get stabbed in the throat
I’m laughin at those now actin so friendly
When just recently it seems I had you against me
I’m sick of being in this twisted dance
What about the last four years girl, you missed ya chance
They all try to trip me up but I will keep steppin
Cause I had to walk through hell to finally reach Heaven
These lessons were learned but had a cost within
I slept through many cold nights and lost some friends
The pain that I've felt, it's insane and I've dealt
With this hate but I stay and remain as myself
I finally got my angel and was given my wings
So I don’t have to close my eyes and live in my dreams
I’m forgiven for things I do wrong in life
Even though I’m not the one to apologize
I keep it all inside but as I make this rap
I wish I could turn the hands of time and take it back
Especially to Taylor, you were my better half
And probably the best friend that I have ever had
Everything you did for me changed my heart
So without you I wouldn’t have came this far
I was stuck in a mind state full of blind hate
Every sensible thought was lost behind rage
But I altered my fate; replaced the negatives
With positives so now I embrace the present gifts
I’ll break through the surface of the lies and deceit
End the cries and defeat, stand and rise to my feet
The sky is the limit but if you try and believe
You can soar through the stars with the sky underneath

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=104276

[WakeUpShow]

flow and structure was near-perfect. I think you should record this over budden's "Follow Your Lead". It would sound terrific.

[classthe_king]

I already have a beat for this but thanks

[Slim Zaddy]

this shit is so organized and well written ,, nice staff, i love how the rhymes fit , good lyrics, i enjoyed it ,,

[classthe_king]

Thanks