ILB looks out

[ilovebender.com]

It's in our nature
to have a greater
mind up in the sky
now it is now
it's in our nature
just to hate ya
so let a part of me lie
because I'm God damned
tired and I don't
want to do anything
no
because the way
that they
make it - is always the God damn same!

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[ilovebender.com]

so this pretty good, short but good. I'd work out if u rap it, but I think it'll defiently work out better if u ''rock'' it, seems more rock type of writing than rap

Thank you Lello, well this might work as a rock/blues piece-thing, me thinks.

a quick re-write:

It's in our nature
to have a greater
mind up in the sky
now it is now
it's in our nature
justa spank ya
so lella parlof me
lie

because
I'm God damned
tired and I don't
want ta do anything
no - yeah
an' the way that you make it
always ends up
the God damn same