New Direction

[WakeUpShow]

Cut a penny in two, and that's you, half decent
Until recent, that could have been me, for good reason
But I'm back up, and I'm back on my grind
I swear it's my time, so I'll stand em in line
My new rhymes are as confusing as half amazing
not to say I'm half amazing cause I've got a classic waiting
I've past the ratings and I'm headed to the top
I'm the best, I've put my hand on a bible and said it to my god
It's ironic that St. Michael is the patron saint of the soldiers
Because my mic has put many battles weight on it's shoulders

http://www.forum.trshady.com/posting.php?mode=reply&f=24&t=105021

[Ka0t1c]

Cut a penny in two, and that's you, half decent
Until recent, that could have been me, for good reason


It's ironic that St. Michael is the patron saint of the soldiers
Because my mic has put many battles weight on it's shoulders

you have good rhyming skills but everything between those two lines i thought wasn't good content...
1st line was clever, but that's about it, nothing special elsewhere

[WakeUpShow]

Cut a penny in two, and that's you, half decent
Until recent, that could have been me, for good reason


It's ironic that St. Michael is the patron saint of the soldiers
Because my mic has put many battles weight on it's shoulders

you have good rhyming skills but everything between those two lines i thought wasn't good content...
1st line was clever, but that's about it, nothing special elsewhere

OK, thanks alot for the feedback

[WakeUpShow]

fucking bump

[WakeUpShow]

rhyming and flow was perfect! concept is mehh (but still good)
Ur improving everytime though!! still better than anythin i come up with

thanks alot man

[WakeUpShow]

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