Boredom

[WakeUpShow]

Some good lines. Flow was off and on. The Rhyming should be more complex. I can definitely tell Relapse influenced this lol. good frop overall though

[Edge]

Some good lines. Flow was off and on. The Rhyming should be more complex. I can definitely tell Relapse influenced this lol. good frop overall though

thanks for the feed. agree bout the rhyming thing, my problem is i'm not getting better, but trying.

it wasnnt bad just a little basic... if you wannacome with more complex rhymes add some internal rhyme and multis to help the flow..
and also work on the structure. its easier to read/flow when the bars are structured nice...

when i show rage, i grab a page from the rhyme book
i leave you shaking, nerves breaking, ya lines shook

thats basic but you can make more and more syllables rhyme at the end of the bar or in the middle... blow good weed/ grow hood seeds and etc.