just a 4 line rhyme

[titan23]

im equivalent to twelve pounds of dynamite
you couldn't stop a freight train goin 90 at night
so why you tryna bring me down on this beautiful night
iim so high up in the sky you'll need your b-lurs for the sight

something that just popped in my head and i wanted to right it down

oh and say "b-lurs" as "blurs"
i guess it can be like it's blurry if im so far away, and b-lurs as binoculars are need to see me

[Emadyville]

not bad, surprised in 4 lines you used the rhyme of night twice tho

[titan23]

haha i know, it's not very creative/different. it's a bit repetitive

[mdemaz]

It's still pretty dope though...I'm just glad people want to express themselves in these times of struggle.
Props.

[titan23]

thanks bruh