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fuck wit it

Postby Enimee » Jul 5th, '10, 15:13

Enimees the entity. forever? nah i want this shit indefinitely
if you think to mess wit me then its lyrical Beretta speech
cause i stay with a heavy weapon, never any protection
bringin truth to the statement, enimees fuckin reckless
and if you think once bout testin me, kid shit will get ugly son
cause im on my grind day and night like da boi kid cudi was
im ignitin flames, wicks and lighters change you jus flicker
and i spit with such wit runnin these tracks like olympic sprinters
internet frontin dog online gangstas this shit has gotta stop
cause im out here qettin Quaps, you runnin late blame da shitty watch
so please dont confuse this with some shit that youve hear before
CAUSE I EAT BEEF<these other cats? well the must be herbivores
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Re: fuck wit it

Postby gutawafang » Jul 6th, '10, 02:55

vocab is damn good. flow could be better. ;)
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Re: fuck wit it

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 6th, '10, 02:56

yea vocab is sick, i thought flow was good, nice man :y: check out my diss, i need feed (its called haha)
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Re: fuck wit it

Postby Enimee » Jul 6th, '10, 11:38

word perciate the feeed
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Re: fuck wit it

Postby Enimee » Jul 7th, '10, 04:26

uhh bump???
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Re: fuck wit it

Postby Enimee » Jan 23rd, '11, 03:41

and bump
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