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Lyrical Obelisk

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Lyrical Obelisk

Postby classthe_king » Jan 23rd, '11, 05:01

This got out of control fast

My clenched fists open throats, soakin hoes
In blood as I club and pulverize their corroded bones
Take their broken toes, snap it off, stick it in my fractured jaw
And then laugh at yall as I bash ya skull
I thrash and maul in cities, I’m sick, cynical, save ya kids
From the sadistic, syllable Satanist
I’m rapin this; get thrown from the tops of cliffs
If you have the fuckin nerve to tell me that a god exists
How can you say it’s not my gift, I’ve got this bitch
I can easily squash ya diss with my colossus fists
This is the apocalypse, a lyrical pestilence
So you get engulfed from the flames of my spiritual elements
So be fearful of hell cause when my path is crossed
I’ll drag him off to my basement and place him in casts and saw
His face then I break limbs then retire the soul
But all that waits is the fire below


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Last edited by classthe_king on Jan 23rd, '11, 20:37, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Lyrical Obelisk

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 23rd, '11, 05:06

I likes it bra...pretty gritty stuff

really interested in hearing it in audio if you turn it into so :b:
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Re: Lyrical Obelisk

Postby classthe_king » Jan 23rd, '11, 05:25

I probably won't record this unless I have free time one day and I have absolutely nothing to record. I just did this real quick for the hell of it.
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