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Re: Slags

Postby SlimShadyX313X » Jan 8th, '11, 21:57

Pretty good :y:

Lines 6 7 8 were my fav
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“Dealing with backstabbers,
there was one thing I learned. They're only powerful when you got your back turned.”


Brain damage, ever since the day I was born
Drugs is what they used to say I was on
They say I never knew which way I was goin
But everywhere I go they keep playin my song.

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Re: Slags

Postby Edge » Jan 15th, '11, 01:27

we dont give a fuck, me and clarky, just relax, look for whores
in fact iv been with every skank in that black book of yours
we just spit game, to any rich dame
matter a fact, i dont even know the bitch name
switch, mayne, id rather take the blond hoe
yea shes acting pretty bitchy, but i, still will drop the bomb, bro
my boy clark agreed and he said hed take the bruenette
he said i better spark him later, and i told him, you bet
so im talking to the girl, as im already feelin tipsy
and shes dressin slutty, i could almost see a titty
matter of fack, fuck that, i see her kitty
nice little pink, tight thing, lookin pretty
so i go and tell her, look girl, i just got a nice upskirt
that makes me wanna pull ur skirt down, as ur shirt goes upward
she goes ''absurd, your gunna treat me like that?''
damn right hoe, dont like it and get beat with my bat
that i got in my trunk, so chew this pill and lets go
we went to my crib fucked fast and ill, the heads slow
she finished me off, and i sent her to my car
let her chew a valium, percocent and a bar
i dropped the bitch off and called up my man clark
told him meet me by the spark, cuz i owe u a spark

we be gettin with them girls, that others say are easy
but theyre my favorite types, they always wanna please me
girl your chill with captain clark, and E.D.G.E
so get down on your knees and get to actin sleezy

theres a verse and a hook, idk i u like it but urs inspired me and i tried to keep on subject
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Slags

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 25th, '11, 21:00

link of feedback?
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so much WIN!
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