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Spyder - Back on the Scene

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Spyder - Back on the Scene

Postby Spyder » Jan 24th, '11, 19:59

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goes to slaughterhouse beat, will be recorded if i can find beat

Spyder gone for good and fell off, who say
Text artists comin fake off the top rockin a toupee.
Lyrics to split a wig, my flow Rogaine
Here to murder the no name joe blows with no game
This is what you get when u mix match tips, propane
A son of bitch whose spits just to throw flames.
What I mean is I’m back with the fire back on the scene
packin passion, desire Florida ballin turn my ‘magic to heat’.
forget the gat and the lean be respectin this piece
an infectious disease with a gut for gluttony next at the feast
heres a check for the lease im back to battle cats that was askin for me/
about this rap im gettin proactive, avril lavigne
with low blows like laxatives, trashin ya jeans.
beats my bitch, I charlie sheen if u battle my team
whether I decapitate or dicaprio, attackin ya dream.
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Re: Spyder - Back on the Scene

Postby classthe_king » Jan 25th, '11, 00:50

Ummmmm...not your best piece, but you have been inactive for awhile. I've seen that Toupee line been used 50 times and I don't really see the point of the magic and heat line, it just seemed forced. Everything else was kinda boring, glad you're back though.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Spyder - Back on the Scene

Postby Spyder » Jan 25th, '11, 15:20

ya i was concentrating on flow more, but check out my other drops bro :y:
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Re: Spyder - Back on the Scene

Postby Poison Ivy » Jan 25th, '11, 22:02

Another good title for this is "I'm Back", lol. But in my opinion you had a nice flow it was well done. I haven't seen your other work but your a pretty good writer keep it up. :y:
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