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any inspiration hints lol

Postby Just Silver » Jan 26th, '11, 03:43

damn ive been wanting to just put down some bars but havent been inspired enough

It seems after awhile multis got real tiring for me and i just didnt know what style i was

I NEED HELP lol
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Re: any inspiration hints lol

Postby Just Silver » Jan 26th, '11, 03:47

recent feedback---- viewtopic.php?f=24&t=106816&p=1495190#p1495190
u should check it out too :whistle:


Im settin' my radio clock straight on the dot
Facing the clock ready or not
Trying to top the verses I thought often a lot
Money wasn't offered for spots so I entered my drop
Knowing that I probably wouldn't pop
Only God knew or not If i had just some talk
Or some chalk i would outline in mind or jot
Even when rhymes have stopped to a level I knock
I embedded the plot in my own little box
I might use it now and later a lil sour debater
Much more than your average savior


that was the last of what i wrote before i lost interest lol
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Re: any inspiration hints lol

Postby classthe_king » Jan 26th, '11, 22:39

Rap about your life
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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