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Is this considered biting?

Postby VenomBlackViper » Feb 26th, '11, 11:04

Ok so I started writing seriously during late 09, I discovered multis & punchlines early 2010 & got way better at it. This was part of a verse I wrote in summer of 2010

I'll cut you off while your speaking and take a machete to your tongue
fuck love, bitch don't get at me with that petty cupid stuff
I'll rip your fuckin skirt off & finger you with a freddy kruger glove

then a couple of months later I discover Celph Titled, before this I got my punchline fix mainly from watching battle raps. Anyways during one song I hear this

Army of the Pharaohs, we never make love songs,
We finger fuck bitches with freddy krueger gloves on

I automatically thought of the shit I wrote & got mad thinking of it as him biting me even though his was written & recorded way before I even started rapping, not only that but thats one of his most famous punchlines he even has another line talking about it "Your album sells like clothes at a nudist club, its the dude you love that had that line about the krueger glove". So even though I wrote this before hearing of Celph Titled does this count as biting or not?

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Re: Is this considered biting?

Postby classthe_king » Feb 26th, '11, 16:35

Yeah, that shit happens to me a lot. You just have to get rid of the punchline you wrote.
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