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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 15th, '11, 23:18

you wanna know what is goin wrong
well, i've been bullshittin all along
while hittin dro by glass bowls, blunts and bongs
when i could've been in one of you assholes' songs
and now you've drawn my last straw
i'll blast you in your soft jaw with my southpaw
cuz i wanna watch you crawl and claw, or cry "Uncle"
so now do you wanna call the law or shout out allah?
it's whatever dawg, i'm rollin on, go to hell
and tell the devil that kevin says hello
i'll prolly see him tomorrow, oh well
no time you can borrow or sell
and some scars don't heal
but it's hard to find sunshine
when you're tryna climb up a hill while under a spell
cuz your eyes conceil the lies unrevealed that are quite real
but your heart can't feel the darkness that falls
which targets us still, so i arm for assault
and keep sharp with my steel so i'm not startled at all
oh i love to start up the war
cuz how powerful my skills are
before they bombard at my doors
i guard it well
boarded, with alarms and a cord
that explodes for those who explore
too close, my headquarters when i'm not on tours
or from the poisonous oders they overdose
like a smell in the sewers
boy, this forum is almost a ghost board
i feel like a retard, or at least a poor sport
i think i need a divorce court
cuz oh lord, i'm caught by the enforcer
do i need a lawyer or should i kill the bitch with the recorder
maybe even torture, and takin portraits of her organs to post em


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oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: jibber jabber

Postby WakeUpShow » Jan 16th, '11, 06:50

rhyming was atrocious
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Re: jibber jabber

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 28th, '11, 21:57

thanx for the feedback, i know it's late... :whistle:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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