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School

Postby Trimss » Mar 20th, '11, 00:53

Some forced multis i think.. but i guess it's better than my precedents.

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I've always been the first to leave the class,
"You gotta finish school don't you believe?" My ass!
If I always hated it? Why ask
My only task was makin' fun
Runnin' on teacher nerves, doin' puns,
shit, i'm smarter than theses cunts,
If I had a gun I prolly cock it,
Make em suck it, like they'll know what t(w)o
cock is, lock it, my target is ready to get bullied,
fuck it, mortal fight so i'm gonna finish' it,
I'm gonna get your head lost, i'm gonna vanish it,
they use to tell me "enough with that vanity shit"
never tried hypocrisia, it's not for me,
what i had to say i said it like they were ennemies,
so now you know we've never been friends , teachers and me,
I was so bored in class,
Bitchin' like a whore, lazy like no one ever was
thinkin' of melodies like i had a bass
Spittin' lyrics as mad as Nas's
Dreamin' to get out by Hittin a glass,
runnin' like I never has, like a kamikaze,
with a bomb strapped to his chest before he explodes himself dead,
wakin' up fucked up still in class,
why can't i just dream of stealin' cash,
another one of my exam is fillin' the trash,
the beast is unleashed, makes you feelin' trash
y'all gettin' bashed
it's not a movie, ain't no cast,
it's the story of my life, run fast
if you don't wanna get trapped, like my wife
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Re: School

Postby VenomBlackViper » Mar 21st, '11, 10:58

Gotta step your rhyming game up bruh, Nas doesn't rhyme with bass or glass and neither does kamikaze.
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Re: School

Postby Trimss » Mar 21st, '11, 16:46

VenomBlackViper wrote:Gotta step your rhyming game up bruh, Nas doesn't rhyme with bass or glass and neither does kamikaze.


I know i have to step my rhyming game, but

Bitchin' like a whore, lazy like no one ever was
thinkin' of melodies like i had a bass
Spittin' lyrics as mad as Nas's
Dreamin' to get out by Hittin a glass,

But you're right for kamikaze, i didn't really know if it rhymes or not and couldn't change it.

Thanks :y:
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