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Regulator

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Regulator

Postby westsidekreidy » Mar 31st, '11, 14:53

Heres a verse to a song "back in town" I did with a friend of mine. If you wanna hear the audio let me know! I orginally called the verse "Regulator"

Reidy the regulator, haters smell ya later
ya'll ain't on my level, broken elevators
my talent becomes greater, your ears favorite flavor
the rap slayer, hip hop terminator
the music govena, if you "goin in" i'll cover ya
you a few steps down from me like the stairs broke from under ya
the lyrical tidal comes, no where you could hide from
Richfield is the city that I reside from
cause its the pride of, all of us spartans
and now i'm back in here gettin it started
the heart of hip hop is my entire target
and me and him gon' keep spittin, till we the largest
rap duo, kickin it like judo
till we gettin girls pregnate, juno
Class is back in session, heres the lesson
the dynamic duo is back, 62nd connection!
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Re: Regulator

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 31st, '11, 23:22

i think you got some talent, but it can be stretched out more and maybe figure out a way to keep the mood of the song right, is this a serious song??? i didnt think it was
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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