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Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

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Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby gutawafang » Mar 29th, '11, 18:31

Another collab with Mac. Feedback guys. Please!!! :flower: I've not posted here in a long time. Thanks. :)

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Verse 1

Macdaddy
It ain’t an alarm when I’m thirsty and starving/
I attack wack rappers without mercy, unconscious/
Possessed with the hunger of a lurking piranha /
Searching for prey, first hurting their honor/
Prep for the feastin, I’m beastin on weaklings/
I see when I’m seekin a meal that’s appeasing/
Any day, anytime, no need to be seasoned/
I eat my opposition, do I need another reason?/
Fuck explanations, I pluck em from vegetation/
After induced paralysis, post verbal engagements/
Lessoned learned is? Reconfigure your statements/
Or I’ll disfigure your faces and make your organs a great dish/
Quite brutal, cats asks me, “Why do you/
Maliciously mutilate emcee’s and act neutral/
Cuz I have no remorse for foes, so I use em/
For nutritional fuel for the next fool to duel wit/

Fish
Imagine a pan, cooking up rhymes in a fucking instant
For an instance, heating these losers up from a distance
Healthy or not, I eat you up with pride and confidence
Let's mix your swag, and your style, aside from commitment
Inherit your talent, but no thanks, you were just amateur
You ain't got lines to put on tracks to go on adventures
When I spit rhymes, even Stevie Wonder grows new pair of eyes
Because I promote you like some buffet, it's food paradise
Oh you don't wanna eat me up, welcome to my restaurant
It's seafood excluding Fish, you know I got the best prawns
More like breast-brawns, buffy beefs, I'll serve you hotdogs
You can't retaliate because you choked with a blood-clot
Fuck hotshots, hard-cocks, go back to playing hopscotch
Jump on one foot, no retries, like Eminem you got one shot
Look I just cut you up, with your bones I make bone soup
Don't look at me cuz I owned you, negative-grown Snoop

Verse 2

Fish
This is just desserts, yeah to me you're Vanilla ice-cream
This is for all the times I thought I had shattered nice dreams
To all you wack cats I'm fucking with, prepared for this wet sex
I'm too fly you can't fly with me to keep up, you got jet-lag
A necessity, that's why they save you first during earthquakes
Gobble you up to prevent starving, that's you in your worse state
The reason you don't give 100% is cuz you're served in slices
You're pizza, you're just fast food, with no worth in prices
You're the product of this shit coming out of my asshole
Even "Eminem" is fucking chocolate, Southpaw's his movie last role
Tell me how you gon' prove me wrong with your career highlight?
Yes, the only way to do it is to be the wolf in Saga Twilight
Eat you bloodsuckers, loser-borns, never meant to fucking rap
Flip me? I flip you back like fried eggs, so good luck in that
I flip the kettle off just before you reach your boiling point
Fuck it, don't wanna provoke you no more cuz you just disappoint

Mac
What you call a coffin I call a hot pocket/
A cemetery’s an "all you eat out" spot wit/
Undertakers to clean up my mess, non profit/
So for those that don’t get, know that I got this/
Own this, run this, microphone pun shit/
A creature of speech, more lethal than gun spit/
Devouring legions of emcee’s that come wit/-
-the BS, but no Ball Sacks to of done shit/
Fuck the butterflies and bees (please) I sting like a hornet/
And float like a swarm of javelins, imported/
Wit Japanese cutlery, my chopsticks are sword tips/
Rippin ribs of ridiculous rhymers in portions/
So now that know how I consume my courses/
I mix and match posers cuz I refuse to sort em/
A wolverine fiendin for a nice stew of corpses/
Made up of rappers you usually bored wit/
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Re: Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby macdaddy019967 » Mar 29th, '11, 19:09

this shit is > oceanic pimps

my favorite verse from you Guta is
Fuck hotshots, hard-cocks, go back to playing hopscotch
Jump on one foot, no retries, like Eminem you got one shot
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Re: Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 29th, '11, 19:14

not too bad :y:
I like this
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Re: Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby Sam. » Mar 29th, '11, 19:32

mac's 1st verse was whack tbh but his second verse had some multis ,but again the content was mehh .

guta : i liked the use of words on this one ,nice multis good job i liked it ,maybe we should do a collab one like you know :unsure:
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Re: Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby gutawafang » Apr 5th, '11, 17:55

DƎRDYPK wrote:not too bad :y:
I like this

Thanks bro for your support always. :y:

MCSam wrote:mac's 1st verse was whack tbh but his second verse had some multis ,but again the content was mehh .

guta : i liked the use of words on this one ,nice multis good job i liked it ,maybe we should do a collab one like you know :unsure:

LOL I think Mac did better in terms of punches and relevance. LOL. but thanks man. :)
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Re: Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby Sam. » Apr 5th, '11, 18:07

gutawafang wrote:LOL I think Mac did better in terms of punches and relevance. LOL. but thanks man. :)

i said what i really felt no biased opinion :D
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Re: Itadakimas (Everybody Let's Eat) -by Fish and Mac

Postby gutawafang » Apr 6th, '11, 18:17

C.R.E.A.M wrote:thats fucking amazing, didn't know MacDaddy can't do shit :laughing:
MacDaddy improved in the 2nd verse , i wasn't feeling the 1st verse
insanly sick punchlines :y:

Guta was the standout imo , it flows perfectly , and the multi's are incredible , and the lyricism is great :8)

macdaddy019967 wrote:this shit is > oceanic pimps


Exactly :worship:

Thanks a lot man. :happy:

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gutawafang wrote:LOL I think Mac did better in terms of punches and relevance. LOL. but thanks man. :)

i said what i really felt no biased opinion :D

Word. Chill. Blahahahahaha. :y:
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