Freestyle (or keystyle wtv)

[Infliction]

Ayyo, i bust up witta colt 45 in the left, and a colt python in the right
If i gotta go and fight then imma do it 2nite
Im the fuckin maddest rapper alive and I aint scared a shit
So bring ur whole fuckin clique,
Im down to fight one man or ten its only a matter of where and when
The scene is set, its time to get ridda ma debt
Pay ma dues and pop yo' crews, steal dey jewels and snatch they glocks, Listen to the clock go tic-tic-tock the times rollin' fast against me
I'm runnin outta things to say in my defence B
Cue the curtain fall, yall cant deny my flow, put you in the ring go toe ta toe, Sock you in the temple and cut out yo dimples while u passed out
These brawls im the first one in, but the last one out
and i dont usually feel the need to shout it but lately im feelin most of yall doubt it, so nuff said here i feel i made my point... shit, gotta go roll a joint...


Gimme input, good, bad watev jus send sum comments.

[Infliction]

i need some feedback! im goin crazyyy i wanna kno wat yall think

[ThomasAguanis]

i thought it was good
you should maybe structure it better. like in lines instead of a paragraph. that's how i do it and pretty much everyone else and it'ss a lot easier to read and see what you're rhyming

[Infliction]

aiight thankz for the feedback

[Ivy]

Thanks for correcting it, that made me actually want to read it, and it made it easier. I liked it, I'm not much as a lyricist when it comes to rapping, so I can't really help you there. But I can say I liked it, keep it up.

[ek_iz_backk]

that shit sucked, freestyle is not your thing, have you thought about cheerleading?

[Infliction]

that shit sucked, freestyle is not your thing, have you thought about cheerleading?

I appreciate yo feedback.. but calm it down wit the dissin yo.. u wanna talk smack like dat then come do it in a battle.